Monday, August 19, 2013

Simple old hat..

In class our teacher asked a question, "What will make a better story a hat or an elephant inside a snake? As I thought many people said the elephant inside a snake was a better story. I respect their opinions but how can a be a better story? What is so amazing of a poor elephant being eating by a snake? Hello!Traumatizing!The hat, can have many stories and good stories that can have meaning. I hat can be simple but how many things have changed to be amazing.  A elephant inside a snake is so plain, ok the snake eat the elephant. How scary! How is the elephant going to get out? This story seems so childish. Hey people we are in High School now.          

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